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Chapter 7 - The Desperate Hours

By Friday evening, the reality of my family’s Parisian holiday had turned into a full-scale psychological collapse.

Danielle had exhausted the meager funds remaining in her checking account. My father’s credit card, which had been carrying an enormous balance from his attempts to project wealth back home, was declined when he tried to purchase train tickets to Versailles.

At 11:00 PM Atlanta time, my apartment intercom buzzed.

I walked over to the wall monitor. It was the concierge from my building’s front desk downstairs.

"Ms. Castillo?"

"Yes, David. What's going on?"

"There is an overseas call coming through on the lobby landline," David said, sounding apologetic. "A woman claiming to be your mother is on the line. She's hysterical, crying that it's a life-or-death emergency and that you've blocked her cell phone. She’s demanding I come up to your door and make you take the call."

I pressed my fingers against the bridge of my nose. "David, please do not transfer any calls from her. If she calls back, tell her that building management does not relay personal messages and that any further harassment will result in a trespass notice."

"Understood, Ms. Castillo. Have a good evening."

Before I could walk back to the living room, my work laptop chimed.

An email had just landed in my corporate inbox. My work email.

It was from Danielle.

Subject: Valerie please read this please don’t delete it.

Valerie,

I am begging you. Please. Dad collapsed in the street near Gare du Nord this afternoon. He had severe chest pains and the French paramedics had to be called. They took him to a public hospital. Mom is sitting in the waiting room and she doesn't speak a word of French. The doctors are saying he needs observation, but the hospital requires international insurance paperwork that was under your booking account!

We don't have money to get back to the airport on Sunday. We haven't eaten a real meal in two days. We're living on bread and water from a corner grocery store. Dad’s face was gray, Val. He looked like he was dying.

I'm sorry. Okay? I'm sorry! I shouldn't have asked for your seat. I shouldn't have said you were bitter. Dad shouldn't have hit you. He knows that now. He was just stressed about money and everything was falling apart. Please just wire three thousand dollars so we can pay the hospital deposit and get home safely. I swear to you I will pay you back every single cent once I get a job. Please don't let Dad die in France.

I stood over my desk, looking at the words on the screen.

Ten years ago, five years ago, even six months ago, this email would have sent me into a full panic. I would have called airlines, coordinated with travel insurance agents, wired every penny in my savings, and stayed up all night translating medical documents between French doctors and my weeping mother.

I picked up my phone and called the 24-hour travel assistance line provided by the premium corporate travel insurance policy I carried through my firm. Because I had originally booked their flights, the emergency medical rider was active under the master policy number.

"Global Medical Assistance, this is Sarah."

"Hi Sarah, my name is Valerie Castillo. I need to verify an emergency admission status for a dependent traveler under policy number GA-992-Castillo."

"One moment, Ms. Castillo." Keystrokes rattled. "Yes, I see the active policy. Who is the patient?"

"Richard Castillo. Supposedly admitted to a hospital near Gare du Nord in Paris within the last six hours."

"Let me check the European coordination log..." Sarah was quiet for nearly two minutes. "Ms. Castillo, I have no record of any admission or emergency call dispatched for Richard Castillo in the Île-de-France region today."

My jaw tightened. "Are you certain?"

"Yes, ma'am. Any hospital intake involving a foreign passport under our policy triggers an immediate notification to our Paris liaison desk. There are no files open under that name."

"Thank you, Sarah."

I hung up.

He hadn't collapsed. There was no hospital. There was no gray-faced emergency.

It was a lie. A manufactured, emotionally manipulative crisis designed to exploit the one lever they thought they still had over me: my fear of being responsible for their pain.

I opened Danielle's email and hit Reply.

Danielle,

I checked with the international medical coordination network. Dad was never admitted to any hospital in Paris.

Do not contact my professional email address again. If you do, I will forward your correspondence to my company's legal security team and file an immediate harassment complaint.

Your flight home departs Sunday at 10:15 AM from Charles de Gaulle. I suggest you find your way to the airport.

May you like

I hit Send.

Then I closed the laptop, went into the kitchen, poured myself a glass of water, and locked my front door.

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